Sunday, May 2, 2010

WRITER'S ISLAND - MESSAGE IN A BOTTLE

Message in a bottle
Swept away by the sea
Secrets held within
Dreams of you and me

Message in a bottle
Tossed to and fro
Emotions hidden inside
Ensnared, nowhere to go

Message in a bottle
Washed up on the shore
Waiting to be found
Love lost no more

Message in a bottle
Read and set free
Never to be trapped again
Our dreams of you and me

11 comments:

Marja said...

"never to be trapped again" A message of freedom Well done KB Great to see you too on writers island.

anthonynorth said...

Beautiful words.

Missy said...

I love the notion of thoughts being uncorked and set free.

flaubert said...

Pretty poem.
Pamela

KB said...

Thanks everyone.

Toadee said...

so is the plan that you and Steve stay on the desert island for some peace?
beautifully written :)

KB said...

Oh that would be heaven.

Stan Ski said...

Just like that other stuff - Metaphors happen!
Read your comment about Writers Island and Whitesnake - sounds like you've been rescued.

KB said...

He certainly did.

Wayne Pitchko said...

no kidden ....things happen....nicely done

KB said...

Thanks Wayne.

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